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Eighty-Eight Manes an Hour

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Where we're going, we don't need scrolls.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Well, this is quite an interesting comic cover. The short "summary" was quite intriguing, I must admit. The trees do add a gloomy feeling to this comic. I feel that Starlight sent BOTH of them back in time, and Twilight is quite angry at her, based on the expressions of their faces.


However:
- Starlight's eyes are purple, not blue. She also has a light, not deep, purple highlight in her mane.
- If they went back in time, as I understood, why does Twilight have a car?
- The summary only says "she". Readers will not get if "she" is Twilight Sparkle or Starlight Glimmer.
- IN terms of coloring, the "dry, desertish" background would probably have made this page look better if it were more colored; or the outfits of both mares.